[CT] Ringo colaboration (was: I'm going to be on "Day to Day"...)

[Dan Moran]

Maureen wrote:
> I think this sounds like a very good thing. You certainly have stuff
> you can teach Mr. Ringo, and he does have good storyteller stuff
> underneath everything.

That may be, but it goes both ways. John is a military analyst and knows
vastly more than I do about, you know, WAR -- I couldn't write the novel
I want to write without him or someone like him. And I really enjoy his
dialog and combat scenes -- I think we'll match up well for this
particular story.

> But for God's sake and the love of English teachers everywhere,
> make someone proofread and insert commas in the right places! Oh,
> the humanity!

Just because, a comma is in the wrong, place, sheesh. Some people,
overreact.

:-) I'm a comma snob myself. I haven't noticed any problems with them in
John's writing, but just for you I'll try and make sure things flow.

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